hrm...
This has it's ups and downs, that's for sure. The flash as a whole seems to move too slowly, considering it is a war scene. There's just something missing that gives it that exciting feel. You did do a good job cinematography, though. I liked the scene with the arrow being raised up and fired, it looks like a scene you'd see in a movie.
The animation was okay, but your drawings could use a little more effort, I think.
Overall not a bad flash, but in need of much work.
Alright
Your drawings are very good. You have some talent in that department, for sure. Try utilizing your drawing ability in flash, you might find yourself to be a good animator.
The largeness of the pictures seemed a bit over-the-top, as closing the window after viewing was a bit of a challenge. :x
Cool pic, though.
Wow..
This really brings things into perspective at a really basic level. The bitmap images wern't the best, and the white text was a bit hard to see on some of the background images. But to be honest, I'd hardly say that the images had much effect at all on my judging of this flash. You could have told the story with words and a black screen and I still would have been interested. This was a really original and interesting concept. I loved it!
lol!
This was awesome! One of the best slapstick flashes I've seen in a while. The humor was so rich, and you did it all with no voices of any kind.
I can respect the idea of making flash with no diolauge, but I would at least add some kind of background music and/or more sound effects to make it seem less quiet.
Overall, this was an awesomely funny flash, truly made me laugh out loud! XD
Cool!
I'll start by saying that I think the idea for this flash is so awesomely original! I've never seen anything quite like it! I loved the "oily" art style, it was very smooth captivating to watch.
The song is so up-tempo, yet it seems to meet the flow and mood of this flash perfectly.
Overall, you did an awesome job with this creative flash. Nice work and congrats on the award! :D
lol
Though there wasn't too much content to be found here, the animation was superb, I'll give you that. The song was a bit on the fruity side, but it flowed with the flash well.
I found this to be very..abstract, and quite interesting. Good job.
Good
This is a solid flash in every sense. With your style I could see you making flashes akin to those of a Legendary Frog, or something along those lines, if you work at it. It was all there, the art and animation was passable, and the voices were creative, original and nicely cartoony sounding.
I was laughing so hard when he bought the front row seats with the shoe laces. XD Overall a solid flash, nice work.
Hey...
It was actually a lot better than I was expecting. Though I don't see much of a plot, or even a reason why this war seems to be happening, I do see lots of potential here. You seem to have a handle on the animation, so I would try and focus on a story to put behind it. It would make this much more 3D, and might help you in creating more animation for this, if you ever choose to do so.
nice
A great Clock Day submission. The art and animation were both great, though my favorite part of this had to be the diolauge. In a flash without lots of movement, the diolauge needs to play a bigger role in order to keep things interesting. (Though watching the little random scenes with the other clocks in the background while SBC was working was funny too. :P
Overall a great flash, everything that I was expecting.
Nice Start!
This was a nice claymation! The animation and overall quality were at least up to par with most claymations you see on Newgrounds. My one and only criticism is to work on it more and make it longer! It looks really interesting so far and I'd love to see more. Keep it up!
Thank you! We we're just experimenting and we'll probably do a longer one in the future. ^^
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